Wednesday 1 June 2016

Narrative Writing

James gets bullied
Yay, Hooray!!!!! Says James and Emma as they hop onto an airplane. Sitting on the bumpy plane did nothing to calm down James and Emma’s nerves as they flew over the Indian Ocean on their way to Australia. Their parents (Andrew and Myah) tried everything they could to calm down James and Emma.

When they landed James and Emma were so excited. They screamed so loud that all the people on the plane heard them even the pilot. “I can’t wait to meet new friends, move to our new house” said James. They said Thank you to the pilot as the got of the plane.

Waiting for the taxi to pick up Emma’s family they were talking about what they could do to have fun in Australia. Back in America, Emma played for a Netball team and James played for a Rugby team. They were so excited to be able to play for team again.

The next day is was time for James to go to his new school (Marian high school). It was his first time for James in high school so was really nervous. He didn't know who he would become friends with and what type of learning they would do.

There were so many new people that he didn’t know who to make friends with. Back in America the elementary ( Primary) James was in is a boys and girls school, now he is only in a boys school which is much stricter. But he didn't have a choice because Marian high school is the closest school to his house.

As he was walking to Math class these two boys Daniel and Harry approached him. Daniel said “ Hi I am Daniel and this is my friend Harry, we were wondering if we could be friends”. But really in Daniel’s and Harry’s mind all the wanted to do was to bullie James. In Maths class Daniel, Harry and some few other friend were talking and laughing about the new boy which was James. James didn't know that they were talking about him so he walked over and joined the chat. The math teacher Mr Neil is very strict and he tells his class to make sure that they are quiet but James did not know that. As Mr Neil walked growled very loudly at James.

When school was finished James hopped into the car that their family had just bought. He told his mum about what Daniel and Harry were planning. He said “ Their are these boys at my school named Daniel and Harry and they asked me if we could be friend”. Well that's a good things say James’s mum. But you haven't heard the worst part yet says James, They want to bully me. WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! Says Myah (James’s Mum).

That very night James read some books and watched some movies about bullying so he could see how others stand up to the bullying. As James was watching movies and reading Emma walked in. “ What are you doing said Emma?”. James doesn't reply. “ Mum told me about the thing you said about the bullying, Wait what are you doing?”. “ Nothing” replys James. “ Ok, I don't need to know but i will tell you one thing, BE YOU because you are who you want to be” said Emma. Thanks sis says Emma.

Emma made a youtube video saying “ My brother is getting bullied and i do not know how to help him. Please suggest things in the comments somethings that could help me brother stand up to the bullie”.

The next day when James went to school he over heard what Daniel t Harry were planning. James took a video recording of what they were planing. After he took the video he went to the principal's office and showed it to the Principal ( Mrs Mcdall). When the bell had rang Daniel and Harry were called to the Principal's office. Daniel and Harry did not know what to expect.

When they got to the principal’s office Mrs Mcdall showed them they video that James had took. Daniel and Harry got suspended for 6 weeks and from then on James had a great time at his new school.

By Paige     

5 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 01, 2016

    Great Job Paige. This is a really cool and good narrative. Next time please edit and read your work before you post this because I found lots of mistakes.Apart from that, keep the awesome work up!!

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    1. AnonymousJune 04, 2016

      Thanks AJ
      Next time i will double/triple check my work.
      Thank you for your awesome comment.

      From,Paige

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  2. AnonymousJune 02, 2016

    thanks for your comment paige im jaella by the way so thanks for the comment

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    1. AnonymousJune 04, 2016

      Hi Jaella
      I am not sure where i have commented that is related to you but thanks for the comment.
      Thanks
      From,Paige

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    2. AnonymousJune 07, 2016

      Hi Paige
      ive seen that you have done more to your blog
      its so cool

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